Very nice animation and voice work. The story was a little weak, but I liked the ending. Tighten up your pacing and that should do the trick, I think.
Very nice animation and voice work. The story was a little weak, but I liked the ending. Tighten up your pacing and that should do the trick, I think.
Yeah something about the pacing did feel a little off at parts. I cant tell if thats because I'm starting to get better with pacing and still working out the kinks or I just screwed up this time. Huh!
Excellent animation and voice work. Not really funny though.
Thanks! Maybe you'll like the next one ;)
A good start. Keep working at it.
ha ha ha, perfect in every way.
Well, thanks for exposing us all to something you yourself call "the dumbest thing known to mankind".
Your Welcome.
ugh
That was so painfully dull. 1 for effort.
bloop
That song isn't an Arrogant Worms song.
Zip zop zoobity bop!
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