Not bad. This is around the quality of the early stuff, so you're well on your way.
Not bad. This is around the quality of the early stuff, so you're well on your way.
I love how I just discovered this like, 15 years later. And it is awesome even today, great style and quality.
Nice artwork. You should've coded it to stop at the end though. Also, the whole thing kinda seemed depressing. Did Marge and the kids leave Homer or something?
Thank you. No homer was on his way to work and he crashed, it was a schoolproject and i did not have time to make more. Maybe another time:)
Not bad. Looking forward to some more of your animations.
Thank you!
Well, the animation wasn't bad. The voice acting also wasn't bad, but I couldn't understand what was being said when Ash started whispering, so I missed out on the joke there =\
Very nice animation and voice work. The story was a little weak, but I liked the ending. Tighten up your pacing and that should do the trick, I think.
Yeah something about the pacing did feel a little off at parts. I cant tell if thats because I'm starting to get better with pacing and still working out the kinks or I just screwed up this time. Huh!
While this is much better than Frickass Cartoons, it still needs more work before it goes up on NewGrounds. I get the feeling you are using a video editor/MS Paint to make these rather than an animation program. Try getting one of those? Also, sound would be nice.
I don't have audio equipment for voice acting.
And I might start using an animation software soon, though.
While you clearly have an idea/some talent for animation, you should keep practicing before you submit something like this. It was basically just a slideshow. Perhaps you should consider making a comic?
Excellent animation and voice work. Not really funny though.
Thanks! Maybe you'll like the next one ;)
A good start. Keep working at it.
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